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I create the most awkward sunsets.
Entry two for =tagl's contest since I hated the other one.
And I hate this one too. >___>

Curse me and my hating of all my work.

Wish me luck. There's a lot of good ones I'm up against.
Ceci©:icontagl:

::edit:: blended the skin and shit. so now it's purty-er...i think...O_O

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Sky is amazing color contrast perfectly I like all those purple tones all arround the illustration. The girl pose is so dynamic, it has a very well worked proportion.Maybe the left part of the girl needs to be darke, because the sun light does not reach there I think skin looks so rendered perhaps adding some textures would make it looks better, also add some yellow or orange highlights that comes form the sky shining. Clothes are ok they look original. With hair try to give it like red or pink tones to add some light. I love the concept of this illustration :) well done!! I hope my suggestions can help you!!

Cheers!!
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:iconpandemoniumswings:
I love the color choice and how well you follow it through throughout the artwork. The angle and pose is great in that it uses the negative space well.

I think that the blending could have been smoother however as it feels a little too chunky. I really like how you made the pink lines look real. On a minor note, I think the lines are a little too thick and take away from the impact.

I think that the colors used on the background is awesome. It flows down the bg lovely. But I wish it felt more real, the grass looks too much like a textured brush and fake.

Overall, this creates a striking image and the colors were executed well. Some technical errors were made, but they do not take away from the overall picture.
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:iconblackvixenstudios:
it looks great^^ only thing I se that would make it better is to smooth out the colouring on her face. thr roughness to it takes away from hoe pretty she is.

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Awww Ceci the lollipop princes :D
She looks so cute here.

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It's good :3

But if I'm honest is not your best work, you can do it and luck in the contest ;3

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Wow nice work.
that was fast btw :XD:
:iconwilizin:
That;s one crrrrrrazy looking outfit. ^^

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:iconmelody-musique:
now this is a fabulous picture c:
but perhaps it would've looked better if the skin shades
and the shades of the other things were blended together

like if the Skin shades were blended, it would've perhaps looked realistic.

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:iconhellfaust84:
Another hot pic by the Great Gloomy. And the sunset isn't awkward, I think it looks good.

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just remember, you are your own worst critic :p
and its incentive to improve for your next piece.
:iconwnxsajuukcor:
Ahhhh it's so pretty colored :D

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